This stinker- which was the worst episode to date by a very long chalk when first broadcast- illustrates a common phenomenon in TV script writing when different writers are responsible for each episode.
The writer of this one had clearly been shown the scripts of the episodes that shot immediately before, and blatantly ripped off a lot of their core concepts. Two obvious ones are having the plague crew reduced to powder, matching the alien trick of reducing Kirk's crew to geometric chunks of crystalline material an episode or so earlier. Then, of course, we have the nutty protagonist completely inspired by the rogue federation individual who introduced 'nazi' ideology to an alien planet one or two episodes back.
The tribal backlot nonsense of the main story was just taking the mickey out of earlier episodes only written because of available costumes and backlot sets. And the horrifyingly awful end, when the aliens are revealed to be racist depictions of Americans and Chinese communists, with the same symbols and national documents of the actual USA, is the author expressing his opinion about the size of the cheque he got for writing this dribble.
However, given other shows of the period (and decades later) frequently had maybe 30% of their episodes this badly written, the fact that TOS had so few truly poor episodes speaks very well of the show and those responsible for its creation.
The writer of this one had clearly been shown the scripts of the episodes that shot immediately before, and blatantly ripped off a lot of their core concepts. Two obvious ones are having the plague crew reduced to powder, matching the alien trick of reducing Kirk's crew to geometric chunks of crystalline material an episode or so earlier. Then, of course, we have the nutty protagonist completely inspired by the rogue federation individual who introduced 'nazi' ideology to an alien planet one or two episodes back.
The tribal backlot nonsense of the main story was just taking the mickey out of earlier episodes only written because of available costumes and backlot sets. And the horrifyingly awful end, when the aliens are revealed to be racist depictions of Americans and Chinese communists, with the same symbols and national documents of the actual USA, is the author expressing his opinion about the size of the cheque he got for writing this dribble.
However, given other shows of the period (and decades later) frequently had maybe 30% of their episodes this badly written, the fact that TOS had so few truly poor episodes speaks very well of the show and those responsible for its creation.
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