Ahsoka: Part One: Master and Apprentice (2023)
Season 1, Episode 1
1/10
Writing is really bad on this one.
20 October 2023
Warning: Spoilers
If you need to know how NOT to write a bad script of a show, this episode has it all.

1. No originality - the beginning of the episode is straight copy from Indiana Jones and Star Trek. The chase scene with Sabine Wren is almost identical with the scene in Star Trek where little Kirk stealing a corvette. Also the general story of the episode is a recycle of the stories that have been recycled in other Star Wars stories over and over. You'll experience endless dejavu moments from the beginning to the end of this episode.

2. Breaking a common sense in order to make the plot happen - the so called map is locked, and to unlock the map, you need a key. The key, however, is not a physical key, but just need to solve a simple puzzle which turns out to be easier than solving rubric cubes. The intelligent side kick robot was unable to unlock the map even though it can trace back the light saver that's more than 500 years old.

AI could write a show much better than this.
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