Interesting story, but I have no idea what genre it was trying to be. Action, crime, comedy, horror, and psychological warfare were all elements. Too many contrived things happen to cause her apartment to be the center of the story, though it was extremely hilarious.
I had a hard time grasping the protagonist's demeanour. She seemed like a nice girl that became desperate and got way over her head, or she was crazy to begin with and decided to go with the flow.
The ending causes me to take some stars away. You create all this drama, but you don't know how to conclude it. I guess it's just easier to not think through it and leave a bogus ending.
I had a hard time grasping the protagonist's demeanour. She seemed like a nice girl that became desperate and got way over her head, or she was crazy to begin with and decided to go with the flow.
The ending causes me to take some stars away. You create all this drama, but you don't know how to conclude it. I guess it's just easier to not think through it and leave a bogus ending.