At times this seemed endless. What was the attraction of that ne'er-do-well guy who is the center of all this. And why did the friend love him so much when he has contributed nothing but pain? And what are the motivations of the super-natural characters? I needed some flow to this, some sort of direction. And the last few seconds? How very trite and unfulfilling. I'm a big Lovecraft fan and I didn't see much to enhance the written page.
Review of The Thing on the Doorstep
