The story lines here are good but the writing is sloppy and amateurish. Besides the whole Sergeant Gormley issue where the man was promoted the previous week, the factual errors regarding the military also show a level of incompetence that smacks not of a lack of talent but laziness. The factual errors could easily be resolved by simply using google and wikipedia, in 15 minutes you could rewrite this story to accurately reflect reality.
All-in-all the factual and continuity problem render this episode almost unwatchable. I certainly hope that the quality of the episodes improves.
All-in-all the factual and continuity problem render this episode almost unwatchable. I certainly hope that the quality of the episodes improves.