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The Return (2022)
Do not bother to listen
I liked the storyline at the beginning and the characters were likable but the writing is very immature and far fetched. The farther you get through the story, the more ridiculous and drug out it gets. There are also many discrepancies and inconsistencies in the story, as if the writer forgot what they had stated previously. Some examples are that in Chapter 3, the son, Liam is 9, and then a little later, he is only 4. Another is that Howard, who you are told is the main male character, Bryce's, cousin, later is said to be his younger brother. Also at one point, Natalie's grandmother is basically taken hostage and then there is no mention of her. Somewhere in the 600's episode, Vivian had been seeing a man named Zev, who suddenly becomes Gary Callus. Just out of nowhere these things change, as though the write got confused and decided to change things up but forgot to go back in the story and change it everywhere. She also makes Natalie seem like an idiot. She never stands up for herself, she gets injured constantly, she trusts everyone even after they have done horrible things to her, she gets lost, and she makes terrible decisions. If I didn't have OCD that forces me to finish what I start, I would have abandoned the story long ago. Please DO NOT bother with listening to this story.