In episode 2 you mentioned Lupus. It is not considered a 'Rare' disease anymore, especially in the past 25 years. It just was a disease overlooked or misdiagnosed for many many years. Now it is becoming recognized worldwide. It is also not considered a death sentence disease anymore (used to be a 10 yrs life expectancy after diagnosis). Most of us live for 30 to 50 years after we are diagnosed unless it is affecting a major organ such as the Kidney.
Also when one has Lupus, one of the most prominent symptoms is they DO NOT have energy...your character was quoted to so full of energy and life. NOT! Next time choose a disease that is actually 'Rare'.
Also y'all need to work on your special effects a bit more...the explosions/fires are so cheesy looking...like I'm looking at a cheap video game.
Also when one has Lupus, one of the most prominent symptoms is they DO NOT have energy...your character was quoted to so full of energy and life. NOT! Next time choose a disease that is actually 'Rare'.
Also y'all need to work on your special effects a bit more...the explosions/fires are so cheesy looking...like I'm looking at a cheap video game.
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