"...Jamie stows away to join his older brother on a highway truck heist..."
This premise is the Goal. We see Jamie making one foolish decision after the other leading to the brutal ending the audience isn't expecting.
To be fair: It is a Student low or no-Budget film, that looks fantastic(!) but lacks a deeper Story. It should have been at least 5 to ten Minutes longer. Here lies the missed Chance of showing the audience a compelling relationship between the Brothers. Apart from that: Way to go! What a Twist within the Twist.
This premise is the Goal. We see Jamie making one foolish decision after the other leading to the brutal ending the audience isn't expecting.
To be fair: It is a Student low or no-Budget film, that looks fantastic(!) but lacks a deeper Story. It should have been at least 5 to ten Minutes longer. Here lies the missed Chance of showing the audience a compelling relationship between the Brothers. Apart from that: Way to go! What a Twist within the Twist.
