Many aspects of this episode cannot be reasonably explained with the information we are given. Why are we training children like Spartan II's again when they already moved on to Spartan III's? Does Oni really believe they have another decade or two to get them ready? Were to believe they expected these children to survive without being maimed after being repeatedly beaten by adults with solid metal batons? But my biggest problem is the 'puzzle' Kwan of all people solves.
1) There is a significant size difference between the cave and the room the stellar map/chart/clock is in. So scaling would be difficult.
2) The cave drawings appear old, it is doubtful they would depict the stellar drift needed to solve the puzzle.
3) Kwan is a teenager with no formal education that we know of, yet she can compute stellar drift in her head in seconds? Without know what stellar bodies are near the stars she needs to move? For example a black hole in the vicinity of one would throw of stellar drift computations considerably. But she seems to have zero problems with doing it in her head on the fly.
4) Lastly, is it just me or does anyone think solving a 4 dimensional puzzle (time is included here for the 4th), with a 2 dimensional picture that is much smaller in scale would be near impossible without a lot of time to work with?
This show simply isn't good because it is so poorly written an intelligent viewer has to keep shaking their head as to how these amazing things happen for these characters.
EDIT: Upon a rewatch of the episode I found I hadn't been listening closely enough when Kwan talks of stellar drift. She doesn't move the stars to their current position, but is putting them back where they were when the Forerunners made this puzzle up. That being said, I stand by my assertion that this scene is still not logical/reasonable to someone who actually thinks about what is going on. To expand on why I still think this, that cave have 10's of 'star' pictures, maybe even a 100 or more. Kwan only moves what 4-6 of them? How does she know which ones are the right ones? What further backs this being nonsense is, even if you remove time and make the star chart they all see only 3D, I again ask, how can anyone possibly know which to move and exactly where going by what you saw a while ago on a 2D surface far smaller in scale? As she's talking Kwan places one at about stomach/waist level, the next way over her head. I don't believe that even Miranda or Halsey would have been able to figure that out, let alone in under 10 minutes.
I noticed another piece of nonsense in my rewatch. When John tells Ackerson that he's to go tell everyone the truth about what Parangosky did on Reach, Ackerson replies, "It'll be my word against hers, I don't have proof." Then John tells him "I'll be the proof when I walk out of this room in this armor." Now, correct me if I'm wrong, but shouldn't Ackerson have already figured this out when Parangosky confronts him in the control about not finding and apprehending the Master Chief several scenes earlier? She actually threatens him by implying directly he'll be the one to answer for the 'inconvient questions' that will arise about Reach should it become public the Cheif is still alive. So him saying I have no proof is absolutely ridiculous. He already knows for a fact the proof is standing right there looking him in the face.
This may sound even more picky lol, but, why does Cheif need Ackerson to find his armor? Doesn't he have Cortana unlocking or locking where needed, every door for him? Making ear pieces disable the one security person we see in the whole base? Shouldn't she be able to find it and likely even unlock the way for him to it?
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