In the 30-minute format (less commercial and the intro and epilogue) this episode seem to be rushed.
The ending is also lacking, the police seem to break in at just the right time, with no real explanation as to how and why they got there.
The voice-over by Robert Horton seems to be an attempt at bringing an noir sensibility, but the rest of that is missing. Again, if it were an hour, maybe that could have been worked out.
Still, it was a good story, and I liked that Lieutenant Brandt actually listened to Gil, and did not try to railroad him into jail.
Something else that could have been fleshed out in a longer show would be that the image of Ben Cameron as wife-beater did not seem to square with how everyone else described him. I know that wife-beaters can present a good public face, while being a tyrant at home, but Gil either does not have any doubts, or they were not brought out via the voice-over. As it is, Gil's doubts seems only hinted at by Robert Horton's face as he is looking through the record collection in Mona's apartment.
The ending is also lacking, the police seem to break in at just the right time, with no real explanation as to how and why they got there.
The voice-over by Robert Horton seems to be an attempt at bringing an noir sensibility, but the rest of that is missing. Again, if it were an hour, maybe that could have been worked out.
Still, it was a good story, and I liked that Lieutenant Brandt actually listened to Gil, and did not try to railroad him into jail.
Something else that could have been fleshed out in a longer show would be that the image of Ben Cameron as wife-beater did not seem to square with how everyone else described him. I know that wife-beaters can present a good public face, while being a tyrant at home, but Gil either does not have any doubts, or they were not brought out via the voice-over. As it is, Gil's doubts seems only hinted at by Robert Horton's face as he is looking through the record collection in Mona's apartment.