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(2008 TV Movie)

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This show is pretty awful
GeorgeyMac27 May 2009
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I saw this pilot through a festival screener, and it was a rather unbearable experience. The show surrounds five comedians who inherit a comedy club from a cooky man with a neck scarf, if it sounds like an original idea, you have not seen a lot of television. Mitchel from Survivor Australia is here as an unfunny comedian, that in the first scene confirms he is unfunny. He performs his act in a bathroom, and is so unfunny a patron lets him know. I guess this is supposed to be funny.

Others include a very pregnant woman, an older lush, a Canadian, and Shecky. Shecky has the power to crawl into your head and haunt your dreams. She plays with her bulging belly, shows the audience her thong clad buttocks, and has an intensely irritating voice that may send a stiff breeze of panic into the spine of anyone who watches. There isn't anything offensive about anyone else, except for the chief sin of a comedy show, it isn't funny.

It seemingly is so self satisfied with its comedian actors that the writers forgot to write jokes. Well, not jokes, the show has lots of jokes, none of them tickle even a minor giggle. The set pieces are too long and tend to drag, seemingly to fill out the 24 minute time requirement. The sets themselves also look quite poor. The bar scene especially looks to be taking place in someone's living room, and not in a New York City tavern like the show suggests.

Along with not being funny and dragging, there seems to be no hook to the show. There isn't an attractive or appealing member of the cast. There are two uses of the "f" word. Plus, there are no risks taken in the material or subject matter. I wonder who they are making this show for? The plot is also rather senseless. At first, the comedians don't want to inherit the club, but are constantly shifted back and forth between yes and no, until.... well try to guess what happens. The pilot is a failure on almost all levels. I have seen quite a few poor festival submissions and this ranks not as one of the worst, but one of the most aggredious wastes of time. I have even threatened a few friends of mine with a casual viewing which evokes a swift and negative response. I implore the creator's to give it another try, but to focus on their writing. I have a hard time believing so many writers would contribute to such a low grade product. More schooling perhaps for the show's director/editor, who with her first work comes off as a slipshod amateur.

If you see this at a festival, I suggest you stay clear.
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3/10
A Gas of Wit
billyray333129 May 2009
What is less funny about this weakly produced program? Maybe the comedy routines of the stars. There isn't a joke that works in the whole 24 minutes. The show looks awful, it falls flat, and did i mention it wasn't funny. It's so unfunny it could possibly cure cancer. The story line is convoluted and amazingly forced as i follows the paths of five comics who don't know how to run a business, so why not open a club? Wow, sounds like comedy gold. But comedy is so far removed from this program that it acts like a void of anything creative. I'm sure these people are funny and charming in real life, but on screen they are irritating, screechy, and sloppily put together. Poor actors is also a valid criticism of these people.

The good? well, there is some partial nudity. Not the kind you want to see though. A woman with a bulging stomach bends over in a thong, giving the show a final gasp at attempted humor which leaves the viewer at a complete loss of words. It is inexcusable and inexplicable how professional film makers and "comedians" would feel any aspect of this pilot would work...Let's hope no one picks it up. I can't see that happening ever, as long as the people choosing aren't blind and deaf.
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2/10
Were they Kidding???
Brandongrikas29 May 2009
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Saw this from a pile of festival screeners and it stood out like a bad comedy routine in a bathroom. This show fails on every possible level. It fails to make me care about anyone, it fails to make me smile, and it fails to tell an interesting story at all. We begin in a bathroom where a comedian goes through his weak routine in a bathroom. Why? To be funny I guess. Not much of this show makes any sense at all. The music sounds like it was found from a bargain bin of royalty free muzak. Every scene ends with a lame freeze frame. Also, the actors are just awful. In a show like this you need some sort of appealing performer, but this show features a pack of ugly comedy hacks. A show of comedy performers should be funny right?

The story is rather pedestrian as well. We have the formula of misfits coming together to overcome an obstacle, in this case a group of comedians teaming up to run a club. A tape from a dead friend gives them rules in order to run the club, seemingly to set up future episodes. They can't sell the club and they all need to sign on as equal partners. Why??? We never find out, nor do we ever care. If it made us laugh we would care, but I guess getting weak stand up routines will do.... no it doesn't.

The official web site said this pilot episode cost $25,000. I don't see where the money went. They certainly didn't pay writers. Everything looks like it was shot in a basement and edited on a home computer. I have been a festival screener for a few years, and most of the work from students looks and flows better than this show. As an exercise of torture it will please many, but as an actual television series it needs work. So much work, it may not be salvageable. If the creators of the show actually thought this would work, they have no basis in reality of what make television programs work. Avoid this at every festival you see it at. It is one for the ages.
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