You must be more careful not to contradict yourself in the span of a few minutes
To tell you what the contradictions are would be a spoiler and I don't want to do that. Lets just say that at the 25:45 time mark on the 3rd episode I had to pause and write this comment.
I don't know if was a slip or the act of an editor that did not fully comprehend what was being said but here is a glaring contradiction about what the two principle characters thought of each other at a moment of crisis approaching the climax. I hope you will notice and fix this before additional airings.
Have someone really give this a careful going over - sometimes if you edit or proof your own work you make mistakes like this.
It was very captivating up to this point btw.
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