The infusion of Erie Pennsylvania culture, solid performances and intelligent cinematography created a uniquely professional production from this up-and-coming director. It's obvious, after watching this film, that an incredible amount of thought went into every aspect of this masterfully executed drama. The filming locations and performances were simply an evolutionary step in the right direction. If Hunting Camp is any indication of what Mr. Lyons is capable of, I look forward to his future offerings.
FILM SPECIFIC NOTES: The storyline was somewhat complex for such a short film, but I wouldn't have changed a thing. It's refreshing NOT to be spoon feed a plot by the constant inclusion of redundant dialog and unnecessary flashbacks. While I'm sure others would disagree, I was able to "connect the dots" rather easily while still having the enjoyment of piecing together the story. The usage of "dual meanings" within the dialog was a master stroke by Mr. Lyons.
The performances of George Petrus (Jake) and Trevor Huster (Steve) added stability to an already solid plot. They were both extremely believable and bone chillingly realistic with how they executed the underlying story.
Karen Jeffreys (Susan) has the look of a Hollywood starlet with a camera presence to match. The dual nature of her character was executed flawlessly. Needless to say, it was an interesting take on "a wolf in sheep's clothing."
Rodney Simba Masarirambi (Trevor) added a critical level of realism to the film that otherwise would have left an obvious void.
CRITICISMS: From the perspective of an armchair director, I wish the character of Steve would have been a bit more likable or the friendship between Steve and Jake to have been stronger. I had a feeling that they weren't necessarily "friends" but rather distant acquaintances through Susan. If that avenue had been explored, the river scene could have been that much more dynamic. I also feel that if Jake had taken a "Bananafish" exit, it would have put an exclamation point on his mental health... but obviously would have damaged the ending.
